my new comic! WII YOU!

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 10:08 pm
i guess i should show you it! heres the concept so far and some characters:

IDea for web comic:

STory:
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a boy and his freinds buy nintendos newest consle, the wii u. as they turn on the consle a distubing picture of
shiguru miyamoto pops on te screen and they get sucked into the wii u and its many worlds, turning them into video game
characters themselves. while they are doin stuff, nintendo gets hacked by microsoft, replacing the the nintendo
game worlds and characters in to microsoft games and characters, then sony hacks microsoft doing the same thing then Rare hacks sony and so on, its an all out hackfest and the kids are trapped in the wii u inthe middle of it all!.
(spoilers in case you dont want to here the story or something :/

Characters:(so far, subject to change)
-a boy of 16 or so
-a girl of same age
-generic chinese kid guy with glasses 12 yers old



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what do you think? suggestions welcome!
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 12:46 pm
This is stupid.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 12:48 pm
Darkseid2 wrote:This is stupid.


Wow, what constructive criticism!
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 12:49 pm
IHatePeace22 wrote:
Darkseid2 wrote:This is stupid.


Wow, what constructive criticism!

I try my best.
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Darkseid2 wrote:
IHatePeace22 wrote:
Darkseid2 wrote:This is stupid.


Wow, what constructive criticism!

I try my best.


well then! that certainly helps!
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 12:55 pm
Just don't let it suck.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 1:03 pm
Jomaravar wrote:Just don't let it suck.


i dont plan to.
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 5:42 am
hmm... It's hard telling from what little you have, if it's a good or bad idea. It all depends on how you present it in the end. I would recomend that you only choose to use nintendo, 'cause all that with the hacking sounds a bit odd, unless that of course ruins your whole plot :shock:. You should also try and make it funny, that wil get people to read, even if they think the art (sorry, don't hate me, but the art isn't the best) or story is bad.

But the most importent thing; remember to make this for yourself, and don't think to much about how many may like or dislike your work. you should do it because you find it funny :D and don't let the others stupid comments scare you away from making this. I personally think it's cool that you do it, since i myself would really like to do it too, but lack the creativity to come up with any kind of story.

Best of luck. ;)
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